I am a Year 7 learner in room 3 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher's name is Mrs Tele'a.
Tuesday, 20 November 2018
Narrative
One day there was a family and in that family there was a old lady her name was sauma and the baby was called mia the old man was called Zoe and the son was nina. And they had a floating house. And there house was on top of the pool. And mia fell of the house and she couldn't Swim so zoe jumped in to the pool and saved mia by grabbing mia and Throwing her on top of the house but zoe couldn't get back on the house as zoe looked to the side she show a ladder and went to go get itShe put it on the house and she climb the ladder she got up the house And when she got up mia said her first word and her first word was zoe Zoe was so happy to hear mia say her name.
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