so they held each others hand and started walking. They so close to the ice cream store when layla got really tired and asked her mum can i have a piney back ride
Mia answered why not so Mia hopped on Mia's back . but the wind was getting
Stronger the clouds were turning dark . but they finally got to the ice cream store .
Mia asked them all what flavour ice cream do you guys want. Jemmy responded can i please have chocolate leah said, vanilla please. Angala answered hokie pokie please layla answered can i have strawberry ice cream?'' mia said of course you guys can have it . but as soon as Mia pulled out the money to pay for their ice cream the wind blew it out of her hands.
The kids ran after the money until they saw an old creepy man that caught it. They ran back to Mia and said the money it's with this old creepy man. So mia went up to the old man
And bravely said can i please have my money back so i can buy some ice cream for
The kids. The man answered my name is sam and i saw you you were gonna pay for the kids ice cream until the wind blew it out of your hands so i thought if i catched it
And gave it back to yous you would be so happy. Mia said ohh i thought you were gonna take the money. Sam said i was just trying to help and then handed the money to mia . mia was so happy and the kids so they paid for the ice cream then they sat on the chair outside of the ice-cream store. After they finished eating there ice-cream Mia took the kids and taxied home and had a sleepover and had lots of fun and got
Tired and sleeping.
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